|Reviews for An Alien Appetite|
| Elber of Torou chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Nice. I like the way you created tension in this, first by starting right in the heart of the action, then later by delaying the Representative's response. The "appetites" of the aliens was perhaps a little predictable, but it was still funny to hear a roboticised voice say 'crap'. I look forward to reading more of your work.
| elisefey chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Very amusing. I thoroughly enjoyed it.