Reviews for Mary Sue
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
I. Just. Loved. It.
Harrison O. Brown chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Wow. That's really good; I like the idea, the whole sentiment behind it! :)
TK Anez chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Good short story! Your main character is very interesting, and the only suggestion I have is to elaborate more on Maisie. Since she is such an important character, I think she deserves more than a few paragraphs :) Please check out my story, Ishiki. I'd love to hear your opinion :)
Jacquerie's Wish chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
This was really interesting to read! I really like how you used the situation of a "perfect" girl who feels trapped by other people's expectations of her, and your writing has a smooth sort of flow to it that makes you want to keep reading. Good job! :)