Reviews for 100 Themes Challenge
Tihaq Klee chapter 3 . 1/8/2011
Even in these little shorts you bring an amazing amount of emotion to the table. You make your characters so real...
Lovella chapter 4 . 7/15/2010
"Then he smells it, the metallic odor of blood. It fills the air, fills his senses and he knows, he knows it's his blood. Panic fills him and he fully immerses himself within the shadow world, shifting, moving. He sees him then, and his heart almost stops." Excellent sentence, that one really got me. I liked the fear and adrenaline here, but maybe you should try for a happy chapter? :/ I'm not big on happy endings and sometimes making a couple of really dark chapters is super fun, but lighten up once in a while!
Lovella chapter 3 . 7/15/2010
Poor Eris :( nice angst! obsidian is a great word! caught my eye!
Lovella chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
like this one too :O you really did well to capture her thoughts!
Lovella chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
very good. dark, but good.