Reviews for another dream about you
Moondog Dozier chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
This exhibits very real emotion. It wavers between the dreamlike and reality states to accentuate the developing feelings. Well written. MD:77.
Isca chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
"I sink to my knees, in front of you, [...] I claw at your hands, sobbing, [...] overcome with grief, though you have not yet died." I literally teared-up at this stanza; it's profoundly emotional. I don't even know what to say, really. I don't want to say that it's 'beautiful', because it's a heart-breaking image, but iit does possess some kind of captivating quality.
savor those enticing dreams chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
this was beautiful because of it's reality.

it was not laced in metaphors and similes, it was clear and packed with emotion. i loved that this is something everyone can relate to- the raw feeling made me want to cry.

what a beautiful poem.
rippling iris chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
this is beautiful. i hope this was an effective catharsis. well done. *hug*