I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter, but I was caught up in the story! Great job. Thanks for sharing.

Awws 3 You should make a sequel! Then again I haven't really checked if you have yet... so if you did, then I apologize! And if not... well, you should consider it!

So I usually don't review until I'm finished reading the story, but I couldn't help it- I'm extremely intrigued by this first chapter because you've managed to introduce the characters so well in such a short amount of text! And not to mention I love all three characters already! I'm excited to read the rest... which I'm going to do now :)

:( ...It's...Over...?

It's over... and I lost my bet... :( But who cares about the bet... Because it's over...

I am a little ashamed to say that I subconsciously reread the last, like, four lines repeatedly... I guess I saw the end of the chap... End of the story... And brain just went, 'Hey, I didn't catch that, let's reread it again please!'

*Sigh* I loved it. I really did, and I'm sad that it's over... I really am...

You should totally do a follow up... Just sayin', ;)

'.' *Okay, it was a little bit too mature for Kitty, but i liked it just fine... Actually, thank you very much for stunning her into silence with your amazing story's last chap... (But you sure did make me wait long enough for this, lol. I could practically feel the sexual tension radiating out of the story!)*

AH! Can I just say, I LOVE his brother? I know, i know, I've used that word a LOT, but I really do! He's so cool!

But... :( Only one chapter left...? *sigh* Now I'm sad.

~.~ *Well, I'm sad, but Kitty seems to be taking it just fine... I guess we both are a little yaaawn tired...*

Mmmm, kinky. X)

Love that last line there, lol.

Well, this a short one for me...

O.O *I think Kitty may have taken something when* I wasn't looking... Kitty...?* (O *mushroom.* :P)

I'm light as a feather with happiness right now. :3

They kissed... 8D

I'm still losing the bet, but I don't care at all right now.

...Oh sweet, sweet, love...

- *Look, Kitty's so happy she's not even acting up for once.*

Oh, the teasing, so much teasing... I love it!

The teasing, the caring, the humor, the sadness, I just LOVE it all!

But seriously, Dustin is such an ingrate, refusing to eat that delicious meal that was prepared just for him! ... Lol, just kidding. :P

Well, so far, I'm losing my bet, huh? Oh well, still a great story! Wait, what the hell am I saying? I would have to be completely stupid to think that this story was great, or fantastic, or amazing, or spectacular, or orgasmic, or... Wait, what the hell am I saying...? Of COURSE the story is all of those! well, scratch the last one, that makes feel a little like Dusty... You know...? Stalkerish...?

Oh, and no, he is NOT going to greet his stupid fucktard of a father! ...Is he...?

. *Kitty...*

o *Me~* *Kitty, I'm warning you. Don't even think about-!*

O *~OW! Meow!* *Dammit, Kitty! Well, fuck you too! Go ahead, why don't you go and and greet Hitler while you're at it! See if I care!*

I Choose... LOVE!

I knew he would choose Dusty! (I love that nickname, by the way, I may just have to steal it from you for myself...)

But, not in the, 'This was so predictable.', way. It was a happy way, in that I knew he would choose Dusty... If that makes any sense what I just said...?

I wonder also... Will Tyler make any future appearances...? I'd bet that he will... :3

And poor Dusty had a... Wait, first, how dare Tyler call him a pathetic little bitch! he's the pathetic little whiny ass jealous bitch in this situation!

But anyway, YAY! I just can't get over how cute it all is. It's classic, being comforted after a nightmare by the one you love, but I loved it! It's just one of those things that, in my opinion, can never be overdone in the fiction world! (Unless the same author writes it in their stories repeatedly... But that's a whole other story, though... Literally...)

;.; *There, there, Kitty. It's okay, nobody cares that you're an ugly crier with oddly placed eyes an tears... Shh, it's okay...*

Don't really know if this means anything to you, but...

1.)Tyler wrapped his arm around Cole's neck.

2.)Tyler put Cole's arm around his own shoulders.

3.)Was it chapter 1, I think, where this also happened? or something like it...?

Well, your Honor(?), I rest my unstated case!

~_~ *Your Honor...? Your Honor! Wake up! DX Dammit!*

LOVE HERE!

:3

I love the fluffiness, just sayin.

Don't get me wrong, i love me some hot smex, but I fall prey to fluff whenever and where ever it comes. :P

Aww, they're so close! I wish me and my best friend were that close.

Actually, scratch that. My best friend, and i am rather ashamed to say this behind her back, is a manipulative whoring player when it comes to men. (luckily though, she's just a routine kisser when it comes to guys... as far as I know...)

.* *Kitty! don't wink at that unsuspecting tom cat! You'll lead him on!* (and lead them on she does... :P)

I plan to give lots of love! (in reviews, that is.)

Poor Dustin, having to live with that asshole!

I'd show him a beating if I ever got the chance!

Not that I'll get that chance, seeing as he's... Well... You know.

And I don't know yet if he's supposed to be like that or not, but Tyler seems like he knows how Dustin feels. I feel like bitch slapping him...

If I find out he does how Dustin feels, I'll show him a beating to!

...Well, I would, but... He's not really... Whatever...

X.X *...Kitty?*

First chapter.

Love it already.

Lol.

. *kitty*

o *meow*

Bad boys, these two. What would Cody and Jason think? Oh wait, they're probably doing the same thing downstairs :P hehe

I love this, it's awesome! I really wants to know how Dustin deal with his father though. But since you decided to end it here, I guess it's okay ~ because it's still good!

Hey! Umm, one thing I noticed is that it was hard to keep the descriptions straight. Like, I understand that people's clothes tell a lot about them and you as the author want to reveal aspects of your characters' personalities subtly, but I would give each of them a symbol. Something you can tie them too at all times, maybe give each of them a color, and not make them too close. Like, what I would do is say "Tyler's impossibly tight jeans, black t-shirt, etc reminded me of a doberman pinscher chihuahua. They look just like the real thing, except 1/16 the size and none of the appeal." Or something. I don't know your characters yet, but a symbol or something would be good. Also, "Dustin couldn't help noticing how THEIR dark styles were so alike and yet so different." Sorry... I'm a grammar nazi, I can't help it. There are a few more mistakes like that but I'm going to let you find them as you're going to be re-reading a bunch anyway probably. All in all, it is good. It reads like a professional piece, and I like your tone. Keep updating! :D