Reviews for Be You
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
The end seems very bittersweet, almost like giving up. I like the repitition of the first and last stanzas, it brings home your point.

Keep it up.q
Makia-chan chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
So sad but the truth. What has imprinted itself in the sand should one not follow unless it is of your own feet making the tracks itself.

Lovely poem thank you for posting this up.