|Reviews for Hidden Dreams|
| Tily Everly chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
Sorry it has taken me so long! AND DAMN GIRL! I like it...a lot. Tobias is one sexy beast, you do know how to write them don't you? :p
I also figured Tobias wasn't erm human :D
But I do love it, you have a knack for writing characters I love so carry on or I will cry :)
| Tily Everly chapter 2 . 7/24/2010
ahahaha I like Rivera :D and the sexy beast guy he is so the love intrest yes?
If he's not then I'll have him!
Ah I look forward to more :)
| Tily Everly chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
aw bless...must have been disoriantating, waking up naked in a cemetery and all...
| Giggling Bugs chapter 3 . 7/20/2010
That was Great! i really enjoyed it so far.
i hope yu dont mind a little bit of constructed critisism :$
i just wanted to let you know you could go into detail a little bit. i was thinking the story doesnt really have a lot of overall depth and it doesnt have spots where we can tell what Alice is thinking. you know how her thoughts are always italicized. maybe you could talk about what happened in the gaps from one point to the other. like talk a little bit more about what happened between scenes? lol i dunno, but i thought it was great :D i hope you update soon, i really to know what happens next and i want to read more! lolz keep up the great work!
| JuniperRhose chapter 1 . 7/12/2010
Good beginning. It's a little early to say more, but I hope to read more soon.