Reviews for Straight
sern chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Wow, I'm usually not crazy about reading second person, but I think you did it quite well. Cute story!
big.break.and.laryngitis chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
LOL YAY. So exciting when they're SO STRAIGHT... except they're not. I thought this was super cute. Cliched, whatever, but still. Very cute. I like second person. It used to make me feel awkward, but I recently started to really like it. Nice job :D
Patrick Sentori chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Very very well written!
Florine chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
It was really sweet maybe a little too short but well writen !
ahem chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
I really liked this! It was great. Short yes, but it is a one-shot. You're a great writer. I got all these tingly feelings when reading this and I always see that as a good sign. Write more like this!