|Reviews for They Left This Part Out|
| OrangeXAngel chapter 1 . 8/7/2010
Aw...this is too short for it's own good. x) This is very cute(again)! I laughed at the whole 'how to shake your hair' and 'post on twitter' part, I never really thought about that. I think the 'vague song about a girl you dated for five minutes in the sixth grade,' a nice line since it contrasted with the whole 'fangirl' thing, and I like how he falls for the girl that doesn't care amidst the ones that are screaming his name and fainting everywhere. :D Good job!
| MeAsIAm chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Popstar school - haha. That was really good.
I like the vagueness of the whole thing. It makes the story more appealing.
I notice that you tend to concentrate more on the 'incident' than the 'characters'. It would not have worked well for some, but it works well for you!
| Passionately Yours chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Haha I see that you like to write about famous people very much. But it's all good! They ARE always interesting to read anyway.
| Greatheart chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
I liked this one. It's a little far-fetched that he'd see someone in a sold-out concert hall and have a love at first sight experience, but I'm willing to suspend disbelief. Nice use of lyrics, too. I don't have any other criticisms. Good job!
| the sun softly smiles chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Love this - the sudden vulnerability despite all the defenses and preparation... fabulous. Nice job :)
| Raindrops Melt Away chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
| jeepers09 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
This was good!
| R. Tist chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Popstar school? Genius. :"D Love at first sight through throngs of screaming fans? Genius-er.
| Launo chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
I really like the beginning. It sets the story very well. The lyrics were well written.
"Texting at yoursold-out concert."
There should be a space between you and sold-out.
I felt that the ending effectively closes the story, with reference to the beginning. Good job!