I rather liked this one actually, it was nice. I liked your description of the life all around you, and then of the feelings when the unicorn appeared. It ended well too, everything all closed up. When I look back at it I can't help but think that it makes a point about not beliving what you see, that coming from the first two lines mostly.

All of these poems are beautiful, and they reflect an inner kind of soul we can all see inside you. Serena, Wynter, I wouldn't be surprised if you could write a book of poetry together one day. -Smiles- It's perfect. Absolutely wonderful.

~BB and the Others