|Reviews for Your Battel Will Go On,My Opinion Will Stay Strong|
| Brianna Renee chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
who. that is good.
| Delphina Valitrix chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
A couple grammar corrections:
In the title, "Battel" should be spelled "Battle", and there should be a space after the comma.
Sorry, I don't have a lot of experience with poetry, but I'm guessing it's about a failed relationship?
It's very well written, though; even though I suck at interpreting poetry, I can appreciate the language.
| JuniperRhose chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Love the ending. We don't need you to say them to know the three words. Lovely.