that's different. the most of broken heart poems are about he leaving, but this is like fate.

great poem.

Very, very good poem.:)

Can I say this: I am teary eyed! GAH! That was so tragic and so beautiful all at once it made me want to cry... (and I NEVER cry while reading!) It was so simple yet so profound all at once. My eyes bulged out of my head wile reading 'At his funeral' I thought this guy was a jerk... but I realize it was nothing like that. I think is one of the most tragic things I've ever read! It was also one of the most... Gah, there aren't even words for it! Please continue writing! I love your work so far :D