Reviews for I Know Who God Is: Divinity and the Sacred Self
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 1/15/2011
I like how this piece tied in with the last piece. The titles really connected them. I thought that was good to create a bit of flow between pieces especially since I didn't get that with the first two pieces.

Again I liked the description. The ending asked a really great question. I also liked how you brought Satan in there.

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simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 1/15/2011
The piece was interesting. I thought the descriptions were well done and I liked the part about the mother and daughter knowing each other. The only thing is I was confused as to who this was about. Is it a biblical reference that I just don't know? If so, I would make an a/n explaining that. If not, then I don't get how it ties in to the piece before this.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
"all lok at the diamond"... look

"the void where all life came."... that seemed like it was missing the word from 'cause life came from the void

I really liked this piece. I thought it made some really great points. It discussed a few different issues, but tied it all together with one common theme. I especially liked the part about the heart tango. That was a really cute image.

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waitingforwhatever chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
"all lok"-*look*

"So look for God in the woods and the streams,

in the valleys and hills,

in the preacher's pulpit,

and a church's pews."-I love this verse because it shows the diverse ways one can come to know God, and that there ARE more than one ways.

"follow what makes your heart tango"-
Narq chapter 3 . 7/15/2010
I loved the "I stopped looking outside/myself for you/because you were always here" - because each line was itself but you could also read each line as itself.

Why should brothers kill brothers when we all recieve the same love?

Why indeed!

Narq chapter 2 . 7/15/2010
The wolf and stag imagery is beautiful!
Narq chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
This is good!

I'm not regilious, but seeing that - what you just wrote there - made me think, yes, I know god too, in my way.
Rebex chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
i'm not a very religious person but that was so wonderful that i just adored it ]