This is beautiful! You are a really good poet, I'll have to read more of your work :) Maybe you could read my story, Ishiki. I'd love to hear your opinion on it :)

Really pretty poem! -

Loved the ending though it was very interestiong the was you prtrayed everything

Somehow the message is clear yet evading so it isnt very easy to understand at firs.

Simply beautiful.

~underthedarkness