Reviews for Commanders
sshsilence chapter 33 . 8/24/2010
A Wonderful story!
lovelife247 chapter 33 . 8/22/2010
I loved this story! It was very well-written and it was something different for fictionpress. Your mom has amazing talent. She put a lot of thought into different planets, new technology and a completely different society. I hope you put up the sequel because The Commanders was incredible!
Anneka chapter 9 . 8/21/2010
This is slightly scary 4 me but I m Reading thru.
rockpunk92 chapter 34 . 8/17/2010
wow. this was a really well-written story and I liked it alot! A sequel would be cool.
S. Chase chapter 34 . 8/15/2010
Please start posting the sequel. I really enjoyed reading Commanders and would love for you to post the next. This story had everything: love, betrayal, tears, heartbreak, and more love. :) All emotions that happen in life, which made the story ever more realistic and loveable!
ebs12 chapter 34 . 8/10/2010
really really like this story, sequal? tell your mum well done
Ashe chapter 34 . 8/8/2010
great story, not sure what i expected when i read this, but it definitely impressed me. thanks for posting it! your mom is an excellent writer!
smrae chapter 34 . 7/31/2010
I love "The Wedding" by Julie Garland! It's my favorite :) Can't wait to see the new stories and updates
Catherine Julia Jefferson chapter 33 . 7/29/2010
This story was truly wonderful. I loved the complexity and depth of the characters and their relationships. Everything felt so real-the miscommunications, emotions, and interconnectedness of everything- superb.

Random aside, but... This story would probably get a great response on livejournal, in the orig_slavefic community, for example. People are much better with reviewing there than they are here on fictionpress.
Jen chapter 33 . 7/27/2010
yea! you're my hero for getting this up, and your mom is my quadruple hero for writing this ) Great Book!
rae12391 chapter 33 . 7/27/2010
This has honestly been one of the best stories I have read on fictionpress! It was really well writen and just over all amazing. I would love for you to write a sequel to this story or even the story of Sullia! :D
Meri chapter 33 . 7/27/2010
*dies in a puddle of happy mushy goo* aw I love your mom, she is my new author hero! great story and i can't wait to read more of her writing! and i loved this story, as it is for a romance or if she worked on it a bit more to a science fiction/fantasy novel...and i would buy it if she ever published it, so yeah...thank you for sharing your moms work and thank you to your mom for writing it!
StormyNightTrue chapter 33 . 7/27/2010
I love this story. I was hooked from the beginning, to the point that I checked hourly to see if it was updated! Please please PLEASE let there be a sequel.
Avery H chapter 33 . 7/27/2010

Such a great story. Definitely hope you'll put up more of her writings later on.
CoryD chapter 28 . 7/26/2010
Great Story! Look forward to the next update.
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