Reviews for rusted red daises
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I loved the use of we were, you were, and then the final line, we're not. Just brilliantly crafted. The imagery in this piece is just astounding. Beautifully written. Favorite.
fisheye lens chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
i love how the title

encompasses everything.

it's beautiful

language - i swear -

and i love this line:

"the only line

i have to you."

it's simple


says so much.
slowxromance chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
I think I might be just a little bit in love with your writing. You have a way of drawing people in and holding their attention until the very last sentence. And I also love how you list the music you were listening to at the time. Music is a huge source of inspiration for me.