|Reviews for rusted red daises|
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I loved the use of we were, you were, and then the final line, we're not. Just brilliantly crafted. The imagery in this piece is just astounding. Beautifully written. Favorite.
| fisheye lens chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
i love how the title
language - i swear -
and i love this line:
"the only line
i have to you."
says so much.
| slowxromance chapter 1 . 7/16/2010
I think I might be just a little bit in love with your writing. You have a way of drawing people in and holding their attention until the very last sentence. And I also love how you list the music you were listening to at the time. Music is a huge source of inspiration for me.