|Reviews for Dead Over Two Matrix 1|
| Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 10 . 5/7/2012
It was really sad, but I loved it!
I think more people would read it if there was a better summary for it though. I only read it because I saw the 6th one first.
Keep up the great work!
| CnConrad chapter 6 . 1/23/2012
Ok I get it now.
If I picture all you characters cell shaded with poor English dubs, the entire story makes perfect sense.
| CnConrad chapter 5 . 1/23/2012
I am sticking with my first reaction this is one of the weirdest stories I have ever read.
Very interesting and beautiful imagery but the plot is terribly hard to follow.
I would really like to know what world this is taking place in. At first I thought it was a "real" world, but now it seems like some Anime world based on the way everyone is acting.(ie. overly stereotypical, mysterious powers that people treat as normal,purposefully one dimensional)
By the way I realize you have written several stories and this one is long complete so I doubt any of these reviews will have any impact. However, if you are interested in an in depth review of any chapters pm me.
| CnConrad chapter 4 . 1/23/2012
This is a very well written interesting book. But, it suffers from a bad case of ADD. The story continues to jump POV, tempo, and pace like its going out of style.
| CnConrad chapter 2 . 1/23/2012
Well so far I have say this story is both great and mediocre at the same time.
The great: I don't remember the last time I have seen a story with anywhere near this vivid level of detail. It is probably this great level of detail that makes the other flaws stand out.
The average: The chapter was a little too long and disjointed POV jumped with no transition.
Cliché, there are a few to many stareotypes in the story already (not a big fan of all "normal" kids being 1D sheep)
But, all in all the story is more than interesting enough to make me want to continue.