Love the story! Why do all the good ones have to be abandoned?

Yo, i like how you kept the suspense going...

the belly dancers! well we dont know if they are though really right? hahah we just know they can!

hm so a kala Aye? thats what i'd be huh? cool... haha

I'm haVING MIXED THOUGHTS ABOUT KAISH THOUGH(sorry about caps!)

but, I'm waiting on the next few chapters so i can see whats happening...

ugh, the story of her falling...ugh! the bone! ugh! but you did it without being all grahic...or without being really graphic! great!

Nice

She's scary...

Ah, you changed the beginning :)! Did you rewrite everything? Really good! I like Breve loll

Awesome!