Aaaahhhhhh nooooo looks like I'm just a few years too late haha :( But if you happen to see this in 2024 PLEASE post the rest of this story it is so fascinating so far! I feel that Rina and Silas are destined to be together and I need to see it! Alastor is a piece of trash and I am just dying to find out how everyone fits together. You are a great writer!

Love the story! Why do all the good ones have to be abandoned?

Yo, i like how you kept the suspense going...

the belly dancers! well we dont know if they are though really right? hahah we just know they can!

hm so a kala Aye? thats what i'd be huh? cool... haha

I'm haVING MIXED THOUGHTS ABOUT KAISH THOUGH(sorry about caps!)

but, I'm waiting on the next few chapters so i can see whats happening...

ugh, the story of her falling...ugh! the bone! ugh! but you did it without being all grahic...or without being really graphic! great!

Nice

She's scary...

Ah, you changed the beginning :)! Did you rewrite everything? Really good! I like Breve loll

Awesome!