|Reviews for tumbling toward the earth|
| Helen Cole chapter 1 . 3/23
Wow - I don't even know what to say. This is just beautiful.
"alone beneath the descendind constellations" - I love this!
I was going to point out more lines I love but I'd just be copying the whole poem. How do you do that? It would take forever for me to develop a poem like this.
| djibril chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
wow, you're really good! you keep the theme strung through the poetry beautifully! love the fallen stars, and all their implications!