Reviews for Taking Eden
11cina24 chapter 12 . 8/4/2010
Ohgodd that was VERY descriptive. How the hell is their relationship going to from there? What about mike? Pfnalxjwkbxyszbsl, I'm freaking flaberghasted!

This is too much to take in. Hold on while I spaz out...

HOLY MOTHER OF FUCKING NATURE! SHITSHITSHITSHITSHIT, lol, what did your friends think of this sex chapter? And how in the heck would you know a these thing, experiance maybe? Bahah, wow is all I have to say.
11cina24 chapter 11 . 8/4/2010
I adore Eden!(:

She's awesome.

Ooh seems like Zach is going to try harder to gain that relationship/dating thing that Eden is trying so hard to deny...

Can't wait for the next chappie
do not click chapter 10 . 8/4/2010
Zach! :)
Brendy chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
ugh, ok i seriously have had enough love triangles and a love square is more than i have patience for. cant you just keep it eden/zach and find some original drama for the two to spice it up?
Deadly Disaster chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
i want her to end up with zack
L. Valdez chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
OH! Well, I hope she ends up with Zach... but...

I would love to add Raul to the mix, so he's my vote!
11cina24 chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
Hahah aww thanks!

lol, your BEAST(;
Makayla chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
Zach
reid chapter 10 . 8/3/2010
Zach. of course u know how i feel about that haha
emmslay chapter 9 . 8/3/2010
this was really good

please pleas update soon ;D
emmslay chapter 8 . 8/3/2010
this is so funny please update soon ;D
11cina24 chapter 9 . 8/2/2010
I vote for MIKE!(;

He's the bombdiggity:D

Screw Zach,lol.

Ooh you should ask everyone in the next chapter who they would vote for, zach or mike?

Normally if you tell them there is a poll, you won't get as many people voting.

But yeaa, gahh I love this story. It's awesome(:

Mike should hang out with her more.

Oh I have an idea!

Okay, so one day Eden goes to the gangs house or whatever, Zach is in his room, n Eden and Mike are talking, blah blah blah, then Zach comes out right when Eden agrees to hang out with Mike or something. Zach gets pissed and rebutals et ctera, then Eden yells at him justifiying that she can hang out with anyone she wants and Mike is her friend, blah. Anywhoo that's what I got so far, haha.

Good chapter.
reid chapter 6 . 8/1/2010
lol yeah i like it alot better, the other way was just too rushed
11cina24 chapter 8 . 8/1/2010
Bahaha I swear, I'm having seconds thoughts about Eden not I'm a gang because she'd sure fit in, lol.

Ahh I love her temper. Good chapter;P
emmslay chapter 7 . 7/31/2010
ahahahahahaha this is so good :D

please PLEASE please update soon :P
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