Reviews for Unending
backseat compromises chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
Wow I was a little confused by this but it was rather breathtaking, especially how your introduction played out!
Chromcoff chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
I don't quite know how else to say it, but I liked this! :D
ranDUMM chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
Heyhey!

Wow, I actually really loved the way you wrote this! It was brilliant, because of the poetic touch you gave it. It is a little vague, but I don't feel like that's a problem, here. It's a really really good piece!

To be honest, I don't quite understand the backwards mythological creature. I feel like it's an angel, maybe? But I'm not quite sure. Though I don't think you should change it, becaus eit would take away the ethereal quality it has.

A great challenge piece, congrats and good luck!

ranDUMM
ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Hmm, interesting. Very well written. It was vague, but in a poetic way. I see the reversal, even though it wasn't glaringly obvious. Well done!