Reviews for Fated
Boreeeed chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
I like the idea of this. Though you really have to work on detail. Through the whole thing I had no idea what the two main characters look like, also what the female character's name is. Also, how they got together was akward. I didn't seem real. Though, i belive it would be a wonderful oneshots with more detail.
Reptar chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Wow, absolutely touching darling. Although I understand how she feels. Believe it or not, I've actually had something similar happen to me. Wonderful story :)
kaitybuggg chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
This is really good! Keep adding on please! Watch out for spelling and crap like that... lol jk. :) WRITE ON!
Brightheart chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
i really love all your stories except the supernatural ones. after my twilight obsession ended, i gave up on supernatural things. i practically stay away from them.

this story has a bunch of grammar mistakes and is a little odd and cut off. otherwise, it had a lot of potential. i like your other stories too, not just my high school life. FYI

i updated my story too.
One-Loving-Song chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
its good. I like it. really cute, and all.
Celestial-Panda chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
Aww, this is cute. I like it ]