Reviews for Fated |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea of this. Though you really have to work on detail. Through the whole thing I had no idea what the two main characters look like, also what the female character's name is. Also, how they got together was akward. I didn't seem real. Though, i belive it would be a wonderful oneshots with more detail. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, absolutely touching darling. Although I understand how she feels. Believe it or not, I've actually had something similar happen to me. Wonderful story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is really good! Keep adding on please! Watch out for spelling and crap like that... lol jk. :) WRITE ON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really love all your stories except the supernatural ones. after my twilight obsession ended, i gave up on supernatural things. i practically stay away from them. this story has a bunch of grammar mistakes and is a little odd and cut off. otherwise, it had a lot of potential. i like your other stories too, not just my high school life. FYI i updated my story too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() its good. I like it. really cute, and all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, this is cute. I like it ] |