Reviews for Focus
gumdropj chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
This story is so freakin' AMAZING! That's a fact. I just absolutely love it. You're like a Mastermind or something. The Best of General Fiction. I don't know what other endings you had in mind, but this one totally rocks!

I couldn't hear anything.

It just jumped out at me. I wasn't expecting it at all. Kinda sad though.

I love the character too. So mysterious...

Creative Writing is definitely your thing. ;)