Reviews for The Tarachian Days Book 1: The Slaves of Zachavi
Guest chapter 20 . 8/13/2014
I'm thinking it's a little too soap operaish. That's just how I think, though. If you want to do it, I'm cool with that. :) Love the plot line, by the way!
Angels Have Faith chapter 1 . 3/12/2014
sounds interesting, will read it.
Ren the Wolf chapter 11 . 8/13/2013
I hope Lando doesn't die! And I hope Karik doesn't hurt Ranaya...

-L. Mercy
Ren the Wolf chapter 10 . 8/13/2013
Wow, guess Lando got lucky...

-L. Mercy
Ren the Wolf chapter 9 . 6/5/2013
Aw, poor Ranaya. All that she has to go through... Stupid Karik! It's all HIS fault!

-L. Mercy
Ren the Wolf chapter 7 . 5/28/2013
Karik kissed her? Ugh! What a creeper!
Ren the Wolf chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
Karik is evil.
Ren the Wolf chapter 3 . 5/26/2013
Great chapter. I wish that king would not want to marry her.
Ren the Wolf chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
The ending of the chapter was cute. Lando's actions are pretty funny. :)
Ren the Wolf chapter 1 . 5/18/2013
Okay, this is a great story so far! Despite some minor errors, I found this story interesting. This is one story I'm definately going to read over the summer! ;)
ElfDrake chapter 40 . 3/16/2013
I'm sorry Irene hit you so hard. I remember being terrified for it - my Dad, his girlfriend, her two daughters, and I went down to South Carolina exactly when the hurricane hit. As it turns out, it hit harder back home. D
Also, I'd be willing to join your community about elves.
ElfDrake chapter 13 . 3/15/2013
I already know how to do archery. My aim isn't perfect. Anyhow, archery is brilliant! Just like your story, actually.
William Kayspear chapter 63 . 2/7/2013
AHHHHHH! TWINS! I see what you meant! Btw I LOVE their names!



William Kayspear chapter 62 . 1/19/2013
Haha I love when they fight! I'm glad it ended so well. As for the name... I thing its fine.
William Kayspear chapter 61 . 1/1/2013
You can't do this to me! Please write a seqeul! I will DIE if you don't! Can't live with not knowing what happens next!
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