Reviews for The Relationship
Nigeria chapter 1 . 8/4/2016
absolutely beautiful
of all my years on ficpress
this is the first I've ever reviewed
keep it up
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
This was so brilliantly cute! It was perfect and realistic and romantic and absolutely spot-on perfection! I loved every second of it!
Casey Hope chapter 1 . 9/8/2014
Just loved it ! There's so many emotions through this text... I really enjoyed it !
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
This is so amazing! Oh my gosh, I love these two characters. They couldn't be more perfect for each other! All their arguments, their swearing, and their love is so awesome that I just want to die! This is perfection; I love it :D
The Random Passerby chapter 1 . 3/23/2012
That's so simple yet...somehow deep. It touched me. It is so realistic and believable. I so frickin love it.

You don't make their character shallow and perfect. It has depth, no-nonsense, and enticing realistic flaws to them. And you make this story to the point without some rubbish to stall it. They are like fire against fire. You make it work. Not to fluffy or mushy, but sweet in twisted way.

Well, keep up the great work dude.

GittaStar chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I LOVE IT! It is very funny!
bookhugger chapter 1 . 7/8/2011
I loved this one-shot...especially how you grouped each section by the stages of a relationship. You made me love the characters through and through. :) And I absolutely loved the story too. Great job!
despite-the-protest chapter 1 . 2/22/2011
Adorable. The cussing was a bit repetitive and annoying but I think it added to their character. ;) Good job!
Ellie Nelson chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
This is an unbelievably sweet one-shot. I love the interaction between the characters - it was understated in a good, realistic way, and the way your main characters sort of "click" together is perfect and completely cute.

I love this format, too, where you jump forward in key scenes in their relationship - not necessarily the "big events," but just moments that really exemplify how they play off of each each other.

Beautiful! Adding to my favorites. :)
sappyromancelvr chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Kalilah chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
All I can say is Elena is a my new role model for me :D Yeah I loved her, and the whole story.
FauxAfflictions chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
5 stars
malka chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
so funny ! love it !
chel chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
This is really good. The characters are just so interesting, and their relationship is different than most would expect. I think the only issue is that they might be a little too similar.
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Very creative and clever! Nice job!
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