Reviews for The Relationship |
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Nigeria chapter 1 . 8/4/2016 absolutely beautiful of all my years on ficpress this is the first I've ever reviewed keep it up |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/22/2015 This was so brilliantly cute! It was perfect and realistic and romantic and absolutely spot-on perfection! I loved every second of it! |
Casey Hope chapter 1 . 9/8/2014 Just loved it ! There's so many emotions through this text... I really enjoyed it ! Thanks Casey |
loveofallthatisawesome chapter 1 . 8/20/2012 This is so amazing! Oh my gosh, I love these two characters. They couldn't be more perfect for each other! All their arguments, their swearing, and their love is so awesome that I just want to die! This is perfection; I love it :D |
The Random Passerby chapter 1 . 3/23/2012 That's so simple yet...somehow deep. It touched me. It is so realistic and believable. I so frickin love it. You don't make their character shallow and perfect. It has depth, no-nonsense, and enticing realistic flaws to them. And you make this story to the point without some rubbish to stall it. They are like fire against fire. You make it work. Not to fluffy or mushy, but sweet in twisted way. Well, keep up the great work dude. Dee |
GittaStar chapter 1 . 7/27/2011 I LOVE IT! It is very funny! |
bookhugger chapter 1 . 7/8/2011 I loved this one-shot...especially how you grouped each section by the stages of a relationship. You made me love the characters through and through. :) And I absolutely loved the story too. Great job! |
despite-the-protest chapter 1 . 2/22/2011 Adorable. The cussing was a bit repetitive and annoying but I think it added to their character. ;) Good job! |
Ellie Nelson chapter 1 . 2/16/2011 This is an unbelievably sweet one-shot. I love the interaction between the characters - it was understated in a good, realistic way, and the way your main characters sort of "click" together is perfect and completely cute. I love this format, too, where you jump forward in key scenes in their relationship - not necessarily the "big events," but just moments that really exemplify how they play off of each each other. Beautiful! Adding to my favorites. :) |
sappyromancelvr chapter 1 . 8/18/2010 adorable! |
Kalilah chapter 1 . 8/16/2010 All I can say is Elena is a my new role model for me :D Yeah I loved her, and the whole story. |
FauxAfflictions chapter 1 . 8/9/2010 5 stars |
malka chapter 1 . 8/2/2010 so funny ! love it ! |
chel chapter 1 . 7/31/2010 This is really good. The characters are just so interesting, and their relationship is different than most would expect. I think the only issue is that they might be a little too similar. |
EnchantedKorean chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 Very creative and clever! Nice job! |