Their relationship is so cute! I love how Elena is bold!:)

That was really good. It was romantic and sweet but not the same as every other romantic and sweet story. And I loved the stages that you had them go through. They added a lot to the story and helped it flow really nicely.

Great job!

that's such a cute oneshot lol :)

it was really well written

This was fuxxing awesome! I love Elena.

Diego liked her before she went up to him, didn't he. I'm guessing his group was the stereotypical skater/druggie group that scares the shit outta most people.

I love how you gave Diego a personality. Most people just have them be tough, scary, and possessive and shxt. but you gave him a real personality. Cause everybody's different and just cause you're with a specific group doesn't mean you are all alike.

so LOVE the ONEshot.

-Im Just Mlssundaztood

one bad-ass one-shot. i totally loved it. i guess trying to perfect it, spending hours editing really paid off. i love elena's character. so feisty and hilarious. the ending's lovely albeit simple.

Bwahahaha. As Elena would say: This was fucking awesome!

Favourite lines/parts include:

- "Jesus Christ, man, I didn't ask you if you'd like to go bomb the fucking police station."

- "You lose your sense of direction or something, Arturi?" she asked, shoving a spoonful of pasta into her mouth and swallowing it down after a couple of quick chews. "Your retard friends are over there." She pointed across the cafeteria where his usual group of friends were using their tabletop as a seat.

- Elena was no fool. She had two eyes in her head and a definite appreciation for the male form, and Diego was most definitely something worth appreciating. That is, until he opened his mouth.

- Exactly ten minutes later, Diego was in her bedroom dressed in jeans, a plaid button-down shirt over a wife beater, and a pair of Vans sneakers. Elena rolled her eyes as she took in his clothes. "God, you're a walking cliché," she said. "All you're missing is a skateboard."

I'm gonna stop before I quote the whole thing, haha XD

Great story!

Loved it, can we have more one-shots? I find yours quite amaing :D

xx

Ali

I really liked this oneshot! It was really amusing (what with the swearing and all) and really unique - don't think I've read a oneshot where the characters are quite like this! So, you should be proud of this because it's really really good. And I love Elena! She is so cool :D

OMG, this has got to be one of the best one shots I've ever read! A unique idea put together and written brilliantly. No wonder you're proud of it!

Bravo :)