Reviews for Golden Delicious
Softly as you go chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
This is impressive, lines such as "Spilled beneath the tree that birthed them/Like discarded marbles." make me think the poem refers to fertility and childhood, that's just my impression of it though :)

Really rather wonderful.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
A rather fantastical take on it :) I really loved that. It simply made me think of magic. Lovely job :)
to be someone else chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
wow! magnificent poem you have here. :]
TK Anez chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
I really liked this poem. The last line was great! Maybe you could check out my story, Ishiki. I'd love to hear your opinion on it :)