Wow... This made me rethink of being that girl. Thank you. Your poem reminded me to think of my family before my sorrow. thank you.

wow this is really sad. you really should have submitted this. i know what it's like to submit to contests and how you sort of doubt that you're good enough to win, but trust me, this would've won for sure. great job and keep writing :)

that is really sad. I think that you should have submitted this, you would have won for sure!

WOW

this was great. you would do all those victims out there a favor if you submitted this. please submit this somewhere. it was too good to end up just read by anonymous people on the internet.

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Sad, but touching. More people out there need to know about things like this. Keep writing!