Reviews for You
TK Anez chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
This is a really good poem. I like how you bolded some of the words because it caught my attention right away and showcased your themes. Maybe you could check out my story, Ishiki. I'd love to hear your opinion on it :)
to be someone else chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Wow...such beautiful description of it. very well done! I know how it feels. And it hurts as well. This poem describes everything a girl had been through when it comes to love and rejection.
Kana-kai chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
Beautiful poem. Great job.