This is a really good poem. I like how you bolded some of the words because it caught my attention right away and showcased your themes. Maybe you could check out my story, Ishiki. I'd love to hear your opinion on it :)

Wow...such beautiful description of it. very well done! I know how it feels. And it hurts as well. This poem describes everything a girl had been through when it comes to love and rejection.

Beautiful poem. Great job.