Reviews for The Pirate's Legacy: New Horizons
Thryna chapter 53 . 7/17/2013
next page? what are you doing to us?

I have to say I absolutely love this series. It's well written, its detailed, the characters are believable: you've done an amazing job. I have to say, however, that you get a little wordy in some places (i.e. 255K words). One very obvious example is when people look into each other's eyes. "He met her brown eyes with his black eyes" is one of your most common phrases, in various forms. Despite this, this is still something where I am WILLING to read all 255K words throughout the novel(s).

I wish you luck in getting these published, because they are absolutely awesome, and deserve to be read by everyone. I can't believe you would do this to them, with the blood promise, though!

Continuity question: are the "Draconian eyes" on Nath purple or watery blue? You kept switching and making it very hard for me to decide which you meant. I'm pretty sure its the purple irises, however.

Again, congratulations and wonderful job with this entire series.
Aerowyn chapter 32 . 7/16/2013
I feel like Em, for a queen who has faced death's door so many times and seen so many things unfold, screams way too much.
Aerowyn chapter 23 . 7/14/2013
Just a note because these kinds of things drive me crazy: in this chapter you say the pistol was a 30th b-day present from Leo, when a few back you said 25th b-day. 25 makes more sense since she isn't 30 yet, if my math is right…
(she starts the journey in #1 at 17, a year later she takes the throne at 18. 10 years later she is 28).
hopelessromantic3 chapter 54 . 6/27/2013
NOOOO! How could you end it like this! I can't believe it's over! You have to keep going! lol You are an amazing writer and I know that you are going to make more amazing stories about this family! I just don't know if I can wait that long! Keep up the good work and i hope great ideas keep coming your way... and FAST!
ChrnoDude chapter 53 . 6/25/2013
The last chapter was so happy, and now i feel sad...
Toxic-noodle725 chapter 54 . 6/24/2013
Holy hell what an ending!

I haven't been around much but I'm finally all caught up and shit bejesus that calypso just had to play malificent here. Sigh.

Such a cruel cruel cliffhanger. Do we have to wait a few years for that story to come out?

You should honestly sell this script to univers studios. Think of the movies and attraction sites that can be based off of this grand trilogy!

*applauds. Well done! Always looking forward to more from this.
Stephanie M. Moore chapter 54 . 6/24/2013
Excellent! Many congratulations!

I've really enjoyed following this story since its beginning (it certainly feels like a long time, doesn't it?) and now it's over! Great story, great characters. I can't wait to see what you will do next!
FebruaryBabes02 chapter 54 . 6/24/2013
Amazing amazing story with a massive cliffhanger !
Catherine chapter 54 . 6/24/2013
Heya!:) Cathy here! I had a spectacular time reading your stories! If you publish, I'll be the first to buy! Can't wait for Roger's backstory! I'm sad but happy for you! So glad I could accompany you on the journey, it's truly been awesome!

Love, love,
hopelessromantic3 chapter 52 . 6/16/2013
TWO WEEKS! I don’t think I will last that long! I read the whole book in 5 days and now I have to wait for two weeks to read the last chapter! IT’S GOING TO KILL ME! lol
On another note, that wedding was so sweet! I love how romantic Roger is! And I love that they are going to have a baby! _ I have no idea what I'm going to do with myself when this is over! I love these books! :D
hopelessromantic3 chapter 51 . 6/16/2013
OH MY GOSH! You have NOOOOOO idea how happy you just made me! _ I was freaking out! My family thought I was going insane! I was laughing and almost crying I was so happy lol even now I can’t stop smiling! Please don’t end it so soon!
lil and tiny chapter 52 . 6/13/2013
I have no excuse for not leaving comments! I'm having a break (then again I've managed to find something to be busy with all the time)
Woo they're finally together! After so long! And that comment about the memories, intriguing. So Roger gave it up willingly? But there's a loophole?
Sappiness at this level is alright - at least he didn't start having stars in his eyes and all. It's time for them to enjoy some mushy moments after all that has happened. 3
ChrnoDude chapter 52 . 6/13/2013
Just enough fluffiness i'd say. Looking forward to the last chapter, but i'm gonna be sad when it's over.
Forever Siriusly Sirius chapter 52 . 6/12/2013
ROGER HAD INSTRUCTIONS THE ENTIRE TIME? *curses that bloody sea monster for killing them*

Now that is just mean. I can imagine Em punching roger or slapping him when /if he tells her.

But its freakng adorable that his memories of her were so important to him i just adghki



Em's kid will be heir, unless it has draconian features. Roger has seemingly accepted the kid

[Roger grunted as he used all his strength to give two powerful rows before he took the handles of both oars in one hand in order to reach over and place his other hand on her stomach.

"We can damn well try, Emelia."]

ADGJKI perfect,

[Remember, while the sea and land can last forever, mortals must face peril and death. The strands can either be the years of life shed or a marriage coming undone by small betrayals." Calypso looked past the bride and groom to Michael and Louise.]

What was that little hint about michael and Louise? If you torture them I might scream. Didnt Em&roger suffer enough for Micheal and Louise too?

I didn't like Calypso's sly smile...

["Calypso's tits, mate. Getting married isn't the end of the world."] I love how so many took the cut as a joking reference to the idea that roger would do anything rather than get married hehehehe

I also love how the all joke about Em keeping Roger on a leash and scheming to make him commander of the Navy xD

[His black eyes narrowed. "Oh," he said, "it's you."] was that Calypso visiting roger?
[What if all our children have Draconian features?] Eee Roger basicallu just said he wants to have more babies with Em asdgjk thats so perfect.

Is there anything after this? A michael/louise volume perhaps? Adopting little Blika? *bats eyelashes innocently* *is so not trying to put ideas in yourbhead ahemhinthintahem*
Stephanie M. Moore chapter 52 . 6/12/2013
Ah. That was adorable! I don't think we've had such a fluffy chapter in a long time.

I'm thrilled that they're happy. This is the beginning of a very satisfying ending for nothing short of an epic trilogy. Last chapter, wow! With the delay, I suppose I'll be reading it from a foreign country. Can't wait!
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