Reviews for Tales of the Hawk
MagicWords chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
What sass your characters have! I love the sarcastic tone. It brings a refreshing touch to the story. I would strive to have a little more detail in here. Plainly, it was all dialog. I think it could be ten times clearer with area description and extra deets. However, that dialog had me laughing. I like this already and hope to see more soon!