dis was sweet maybe u shuld do wid berly nd her bro i would love to read it

Hahahahahahaaa... oh, damn, it said she was frigid! I tjink I've gotten that beforr... blakelobe!

XOXO

I LOVE THIS STORY.

Awesome. Although if this actually happened to me I would probably have kicked the guy in the groin.

But then again, fiction is where you AWWWWWW at normally creepy things. So: AWWWWW! :)

Me love. Blake hot. I love that 'classy punk' type. Your writing is really good as well. I love how you've written this. But I think the introduction part could have been slightly better.

I loved it and it's cynical undertone. Ha Blake and Rianne showed those two real kissing, lol :)

Adorable, not to mention hilarious! And the last line? Yeah, that was just complete and utter genius. Loved it ]

Funny and witty. I enjoyed it very much.

Someone recommended this short to me...LOVED it! Def will read it again!

Kristine

I think that the very last part was my favourite. Great story. I loved it!

Haha, that was really funny.

I loved the sarcastic, slightly bitter undertone to everything. You really caught a break up well.

And someone who wanted her after watching her eat ice cream, hahahahaha. That's great.

All in all, really great oneshot, I enjoyed it (:

Hahahah! Ah, the memories that brought up. (:

My friend and I were pretty sure we were being stalked by these two guys at Oaks Park, so we stalked them and eventually got one of them alone for question time! XD Poor dude. Lesson learned hopefully: don't stalk me unless you wanna be stalked back.

That was strange, because I'm going to disneyland in just a few days. Hahahah.

Haha! Punny Punny!

OMG, love it. One of the best plotlines I've read in ages and so funny. Completely love that Blake dude.

JM

OMFG! NIKOLAI! this was so good...and funny...and amazing...and made me so totally jealous of your brilliance. I definitely felt that you were able to get into the mindset and personality of rianne a lot better. and the humor made it a really fun read. I really really really hope you keep up with your writing and post more of your work...or at least send it to me to read! i would so totally be okay with keeping all your amazingness to myself. mwuahahahaha xp

love ya bunches,

ash