Reviews for Without You
emsaduem chapter 425 . 12/24/2014
I was reading this chapter, entitled "Perfect" whilst listening to music. As I finished the chapter, reading the final word (Perfect), the song I was listening said that exact word. I recommend it! It kinda portrays Gabe and Logan: "Miles Away" by Memphis May Fire.
emsaduem chapter 340 . 12/24/2014
I am addicted. I have binge-read up to chapter 340 in less than two hours. This isn't healthy...
I am aware each chapter is a drabble, and the whole point of a drabble is to be less that 100 words. Sometimes, though, when chapter are mostly made up of dialogue, I get lost and am unable to recognize who is doing the speaking. Maybe that's what you're going for. I'm not sure.
Whatever. It's still AMAZING!
Guest chapter 46 . 5/9/2014
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MyWeirdWorld chapter 501 . 2/2/2014
I was looking for something different, and well, found it.

That was great, read it all in one go. And I was trying so hard not to cry when Gabriel and Logan were at Seth's grave cause I'm sitting in the living room XD

In the beginning I really wasn't sure about Elijah, like almost everyone else apparently (author's notes), and I never guessed about Logan and him so that was a nice revelation. People were so confused about the flashbacks, seemed like you got a lot of complains about that, but when you explained about the "*" I was fine and the flashbacks weren't too vague in my opinion, eventually I could piece it all together.

I loved Alexis, Logan, just all the characters, also the ones from New York. And someone said something about girl and guy emotions in a review , which is actually something I got shit for as well when writing girls because sometimes they come out too sarcastic and apparently they sound too much like a guy? and that comes from one person. So honestly, if one person says something like that, ignore haha. I know I'm like 2 to 3 years late saying that, but still.

I'm going to check out life support now! :D
Dracosgirl chapter 285 . 11/24/2013
"You don't ever have to forget him," he made it sound like a promise. "But you have to let him go."
This part had me in tears! God, your writing is gorgeous!
Hi Again chapter 159 . 9/29/2013
I'm starting to lean more towards Elijah being bi-polar than MPD.
Hi Again chapter 146 . 9/29/2013
Yeah, totally wouldn't have guessed it. Not at all. :/
Hi Again chapter 144 . 9/29/2013
I think Elijah may have multiple personality disorder or something. He's sort of like, back and forth.
Hi Again chapter 102 . 9/29/2013
Y'know, I think I like Elijah. He doesn't seem mean at all anymore.
Hi Again chapter 85 . 9/29/2013
Okay, thanks for making me cry. This is totally depressing. But, don't get me wrong; it's perfectly executed.
Hi Again chapter 77 . 9/28/2013
Woah. Woah woah woah woah woah. Hold up. This is some serious stuff we're getting into now. Wooaaaahhh.
I totally should've called it.
Hi Again chapter 72 . 9/28/2013
I want to know more about the Blue Boy.
Hi Again chapter 68 . 9/28/2013
Yeah, I really don't like Gabriel's dad. Not at all. In the slightest.
Hi Again chapter 64 . 9/28/2013
I think Gabriel's got a chance. If not only because this is labeled as slash. X3

What's hurting me right now though, is my shoulder. I've got a knot in my shoulder. I moved to another new school this year, and I told one of my newer friends that I had a knot in my shoulder, and she tried to massage it out, but then we decided it probably looked really awkward (and wasn't really working anyways :/) and she gave up.
Hi Again chapter 61 . 9/28/2013
Oh... this is pretty sad :(
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