Wow. I don't know what else to say but that, honestly. Didn't think I would particularly end up liking a story with a "psycho serial killer" as the main lead, but I really did. Although, I kind of feel bad for David. Just slightly though. I'm glad Charlotte ended up with Dr Hall. Great story - the character development was really well done! Especially Dr Hall's.

This is now my guilty pleasure. I love how strong Charlotte is. You don't see many stong female characters in books/stories now a day. But perhaps I'm just read the wrong things. Many have fragile females that are push-overs or the entire story they go through completely stupid rampages or things along that line. I mean, I get there are plently of people in the world that are like that, but I'd actualy like to read about a strong female for once so that you can look up to her and not down and pitying at. I also enjoyed her time with David. No because I wanted them to end up together, but because it seems that Charlotte and I have the same point of view. My father and I once got into an argument over how all bad people don't have feelings. That they have no heart. That they are devoid of a soul. I completely disagree. (And I raged at David.) He was a good man, but somepeople just don't see the way I/we do, I guess. And lastly, Dr. Halls/Evander scares the heck out of me but at the same time I just can't help but love his character. It's strange and contradicting, but I like it. Different is good, I guess.
In regards (because Dr. Halls has rubbed off on me),
TheConsciousDreamer

Please get this published so I can buy a copy and treasure it forever

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Evander is an amazing character. I'm glad she ends up with him in the end and that it works out. I was almost expecting some sort of confrontation with David so that was a little anti-climatic but I loved it anyway ;-)

Your story was absolutely captivating. It is very well written and thought-provoking and I can't help but cheer for the main characters despite the fact that one of them is a serial killer.
Thank you so much for sharing this story with us and allowing us to enjoy it.

Oh my God
This story is just so beautiful.
I don't know why I'm into these kinds of stories, but I really really love this one.
Words aren't enough to express how I felt while reading this whole thing.

OOOOH MEH GAWD. O_O EEEEK! Just when it was getting happy. :(

Hi! I just wanted to let you know, I stumbled across this story tonight. I should've gone to bed two hours ago, but this is so good. Thanks for writing, and I can't wait to get to the end!

Rebe

This was an amazing story. I felt like I have walked away from this story a different person with a new, slightly morbid perception of some things. I just wanted to let you know in the hours that it took me to finish this story I enjoyed every last gut wrenching minute of it. This was a truely a fabulous story in need of being published.

This story is so awesome. I truly could not find a fault in it and I always try to pick a part a story. It deserves more reviews. The story was beautiful and the characters were emotional, deep and true. I would of liked i more if you kept Dr. Hall a serial killer though.

Wow. That was really great. To be honest was on my toes the whole time. Everything was great.

I m so interested to read this.

honestly and whole heartedly, I loved this story! The originality and emotions, you make it feel alright to be in love with a serial killer. Not many people can do that. Wrong is wrong, and you gave the bad guy a heart, misunderstood and totally happy ending, as happy as it gets. Your grammar was good and the placement of everything was done in a manner that suited your characters. I enjoyed this read because it was different, it was twisted in a way and it was a bittersweet end. I'm so glad she didn't end up with David, he wasn't right. Too self righteous and didn't really try to understand Charlotte.
I was thinking about a picture and caption I saw. It was of will smith, and it said ''boys laugh at what they put girls through but they won't be laughing when they're wiping tears off their daughters faces for the same reason'' I thought of he would be a nightmare for any guy who dared look and treat his daughte badly.

When you make associations of pictures and captions to a story, you know its impacted you. So thank you, for the great story and adventure.

This story was strangely addictive? I didn't give it much thought when I started to read it, but look at me now, at the end! It's strange, I could perfectly visualise Dr. Hall. I think you did it trough describing his behaviour and the environment (i.e. the cabins). I pictured with pale blonde hair though, I know its not sable, but I really couldn't resist. Thank you for writing this and sharing! I really, really enjoyed this.

-J

Can I just say...I love you.

I just. I can't. Even. This is so amazing. Seriously. YOU are incredible. This deserves so many more reviews.