Reviews for Innocence
Kader Gwyneth Marque chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I always loved stories of loss of innocence, and this is a brilliant example of one. I love how the water drop changed from something of beauty to a cry of mourning over the course of the poem. Great piece.

Cheers,

K.G Marque
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
I really enjoyed this piece. Beautifully written. :) Keep it up!

Anna _