Reviews for Waiting Room
elizabeth chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
love your different style of writting
0-C.L.A.M.-0 chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
What a hopeless story...

It speaks to me, bro. XD
Mirabella chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Brilliant surprising ending! I thought it would be sad still at the end but the waiting hope was a lovely addition.

Vivid and descriptive imagery. It definitey leaves a mark.

I like how you described the shooting star as a dying star. :)