|Reviews for A Pig Mask and a Cute IT Guy|
| zagato chapter 1 . 2/8/2019
This is wonderful, thank you!
| youngin-matomon chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Really well done, and well written. I liked the idea, and that sob story was so sad! You managed to put a history of a whole short story into a one shot. Good work!
| R. Ficst chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
I love it! Such sweet characters, and a great sense of fate and coincidence that isn't overly contrived seeming. Very, very sweet story.
| musicalfishieXD chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
I liked the little piece about ava. I actually intended on reviewing that story but I just kept reading and reading...it did make me cry at points.
Anyways, I would like to point out something I have noticed in the 3 stories of yours that I've read. You are probably short. You tend to go for the same type of guys, which reflect in the romances. You are a hopeless romantic :)
My suggestions are to branch out. Try writing in 3rd person, focus on more than one character, or write from a guys point of view. I really liked the way you wrote in new students, more than I liked your one shots. I think they were good, but the writing wasn't done as well. I think you understand the emotions that go along with grief, but you jumped around with the characters. Mostly, the guys are consistent, but I noticed both vanessa and ava are a little jumpy with their characters, having the right emotions but seeming as if it is really sudden from one to the other. I noticed that more with new students, but it did happen here a little.
Good luck, keep writing, and try and work on the transitions. :)
| Julietish chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
Cute, funny, and adorable! I love how you worked the pig mask into the story; that was hilarious. Cliche and simply nice :)
| WishBlade chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
That was insanely cute! ]
| Rachel chapter 1 . 7/24/2010
This story is so cute. (:
I love how you included the part about Ava and her friends. It fit perfectly in this story.
| purplehost chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
How sweet. Although the pig's mask bit was funny. As far as the mechanics of the story, I didn't notice any typos or mistakes. And I enjoyed reading this. It was worth taking the time to read.
| doodle712 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
:D I thought this was cute!