This is wonderful, thank you!

Really well done, and well written. I liked the idea, and that sob story was so sad! You managed to put a history of a whole short story into a one shot. Good work!

I love it! Such sweet characters, and a great sense of fate and coincidence that isn't overly contrived seeming. Very, very sweet story.

I liked the little piece about ava. I actually intended on reviewing that story but I just kept reading and reading...it did make me cry at points.

Anyways, I would like to point out something I have noticed in the 3 stories of yours that I've read. You are probably short. You tend to go for the same type of guys, which reflect in the romances. You are a hopeless romantic :)

My suggestions are to branch out. Try writing in 3rd person, focus on more than one character, or write from a guys point of view. I really liked the way you wrote in new students, more than I liked your one shots. I think they were good, but the writing wasn't done as well. I think you understand the emotions that go along with grief, but you jumped around with the characters. Mostly, the guys are consistent, but I noticed both vanessa and ava are a little jumpy with their characters, having the right emotions but seeming as if it is really sudden from one to the other. I noticed that more with new students, but it did happen here a little.

Good luck, keep writing, and try and work on the transitions. :)

Cute, funny, and adorable! I love how you worked the pig mask into the story; that was hilarious. Cliche and simply nice :)

XOXO,

Juliet

That was insanely cute! ]

This story is so cute. (:

I love how you included the part about Ava and her friends. It fit perfectly in this story.

~Rachel~

How sweet. Although the pig's mask bit was funny. As far as the mechanics of the story, I didn't notice any typos or mistakes. And I enjoyed reading this. It was worth taking the time to read.

:D I thought this was cute!