|Reviews for Dear Moron|
| xbitemark chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
What an interesting story! A lot of times when you get on here you see the same thing over and over, but I have never seen anything like this before! Can't wait to read more, this is very well written!
| Stormi Reagan chapter 2 . 10/22/2011
I love this chapter because we finally have Jace and her talking for the first time. I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. Your descriptions give me crystal-clear images. :)
| Stormi Reagan chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Honestly, I was addicted to this story right when I started it! Great job. I love the idea you've started, I just hope you finish it :)
| fangbanger19 chapter 16 . 10/22/2011
I need more! I really need more! I can wait for the update, but please do it soon! p.s. i HATE clifhangers. bye.
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 15 . 8/13/2011
""Kiss!" Someone suddenly yelled in the middle of their insults. All eyes turned to this person and I couldn't help but smile. I love Christian."
I love Christian too :D 3
This story is so unbearably adorable! Please update soon! XD
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 14 . 8/13/2011
Omg, that kiss was EPIC! It gave me happiness all around, but then Christian walked in and... and! Omg, I'm sooo giddy right now XD
Btw; I love this line: ""You know what? I gotta shit...sooo i'll just got the bathroom." Christian explained-"
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 13 . 8/13/2011
Yaaaayyyyy~ His house! I can't wait; im reading on!
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 12 . 8/13/2011
Ooh, me and Jace have something in common! We both love Johnny Depp XD He is so honestly epic :)
I like Bruce Willis too, though :D
And omg, this story is just so amazing, I honestly can't do anything but let my mouth drop to the floor and have a surprisingly longs tongue roll out :P
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 11 . 8/13/2011
To be quite honest, my brother's always thought of Santa as a pervert! XD But Mera's phobia is honestly scary! And very reasonable... Not to mention hilarious!
And oh my God, I can't believe Susy's mom! How could she commit adultery? More importantly sleep with her daughters' past BOYFRIEND? It's wrong! And dang girl, this book is packed with sex maniac parents :P
Also, I love how she got back at 'em by announcing her pregnancy, but her parents are just way too mean! It's sad, but it also happens to be a compliment on your part because you wrote it so well that I feel honest emotiions for each character .
Plus, I honestly LOVED the way you ended this chapter! :D
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 10 . 8/13/2011
Aw, I hope your family crisis is over by now!
Omg, I can't wait to find out how they're supposed to act as girlfriend and boyfriend! I'm so lucky you've already put up these chapter a long while ago, otherwise I'd be dying here! :)
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 9 . 8/13/2011
I'd honestly love to edit your stuff, honestly! But I'm not always able to be on the computer because my parents believe that curriculum is better than life itself.. as you can imagine, it's hard... But I hope you have a good beta by now :)
About the story...
Gosh, I honestly can't believe that Susy is pregnant... that's just so very shocking... O_O But then again, she does sleep with a different guy every month, doesn't she? But still... Wow... I'm at loss for words currently...
Btw: I wanted to mention something about Christian before, but I didn't think it was worth it... Your Christian reminds me so much of someone I know, who also happens to be Christian... Are you a mind reader? :P
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 7 . 8/13/2011
Omg, you honestly don't know how grateful I am to your amazing writing ability, and creative head XD Mera and Jace are just so made for each other! :D
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 6 . 8/13/2011
Sexy Lexi eh? Christian must seriously love that car XD
And I'm so sorry for Dylan, and so sorry that hey had such a terrible fight... And I honestly can't believe that Jace didn't go afetr her! He's so mean, but I still can't help but like him. He's got his reasons *sigh*
Okay, I'm so sorry for randomly rambling! Thanks for writing this, and I'm so going to keep on reading XD!
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 5 . 8/13/2011
You are amazing, and I love you!
WOW WOW WOW!
Honestly, you're brilliant, and I doubt that you'll ave a hard time publishing a book if you ever decide to!
Btw: I love their characters! Christian is so epically funny, and Jace is so cute and also quite funny, and he's fun to read about, and Mera is sooooo epic :D
Thanks so much for making this story! You rock! XD
| MelodyOfMyLife chapter 4 . 8/13/2011
William is honestly a horrible flirt, isn't he? But I really enjoyed Mera's epic comebacks! And I can't believe people are able to talk about things like THAT without puking all over themselves O_O
And omg, Jace is being so cute to Mera! Aww! Gilbert the rabbit, and trident gum :) Best gifts ever!
Imma go ahead and read some more now _