Reviews for Dear Moron |
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![]() ![]() This is amazing! I like your story very very much! Put the next chapter soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The chapter was great, we are getting to know more about Jace and Christian, while seeing everyones relations develop well. Especially Susy and Mera's. Update a.s.a.p! & I really hope things get better for you. Just hold out a little longer, so try to be positive and sunny. Then there'd always be a rainbow after a thunder storm. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Christian is adorable as always. :) Jace is a sweetie. XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's a great update! Happy holidays! Hope you update...soon...cause I was dying for this. Hope everything's going well for you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm... *this* could get interesting... I like the story so far! |
![]() ![]() HELLO! THIS STORY IS AWESOME! So... When are you gonna update again? XD I'M EXCITED FOR IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww...cute, real cute *points pretend gun*. ;) Anyways, loved the Mera/Jace interaction and I am really curious as to who this unknown person is. Update soon & Happy Holidays! :D ~Ronnie~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is an awesome story. I love it already. :) I love how weird they all are! :D Can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I just found this story and couldn't put it down (in the sense that it's similar to a book). I guess literally, I couldn't look away from the screen. It so interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() There's a lot I can say about this. I like where it's going and I like your characters. I like your style of writing. But you do have a lot of tense issues. I think that's probably the biggest fault I've noticed- not that you have a lot. It's just something to think about. Update soon ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like what suzy did in this chpt. it adds more to her character. it may seem desperate n immature or childish, but it shows that she really just wants her parents to love her n she isn't bitchy just cos she's shallow. it's nice that another aspect of her is shown. |
![]() ![]() Your posessive You're YOU ARE. 'I bet one day your going to do something good with your life' WRONG! (should be you're!) Learn how to use them! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story. I read all the chapters in around two days, and I really found it quite addicting. I admit that there are some flaws, but the basic idea is exciting and refreshing. Plus, Jace is hot. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well then, that was certainly interesting...lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT WAS AWESOME! Can't wait for more! Hope you update soon! |