Reviews for Dear Moron
A chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
This is amazing! I like your story very very much!

Put the next chapter soon!
Anya the Lascivious chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
The chapter was great, we are getting to know more about Jace and Christian, while seeing everyones relations develop well. Especially Susy and Mera's.

Update a.s.a.p!

& I really hope things get better for you. Just hold out a little longer, so try to be positive and sunny. Then there'd always be a rainbow after a thunder storm.
ghurl00 chapter 12 . 12/31/2010
Christian is adorable as always. :)

Jace is a sweetie. XD
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 12 . 12/30/2010
It's a great update!

Happy holidays!

Hope you update...soon...cause I was dying for this.

Hope everything's going well for you!
LadyFreeWill chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Hm... *this* could get interesting... I like the story so far!
The.Violent.Spazz chapter 11 . 12/28/2010
HELLO! THIS STORY IS AWESOME! So...

When are you gonna update again? XD I'M EXCITED FOR IT!
RonnieMeetsPaper chapter 11 . 12/20/2010
Aww...cute, real cute *points pretend gun*. ;)

Anyways, loved the Mera/Jace interaction and I am really curious as to who this unknown person is.

Update soon & Happy Holidays! :D

~Ronnie~
ghurl00 chapter 11 . 12/8/2010
This is an awesome story.

I love it already. :)

I love how weird they all are! :D

Can't wait for the next chapter.
GermanSam chapter 11 . 11/29/2010
Oh, I just found this story and couldn't put it down (in the sense that it's similar to a book). I guess literally, I couldn't look away from the screen. It so interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Ohcai chapter 11 . 11/24/2010
There's a lot I can say about this. I like where it's going and I like your characters. I like your style of writing.

But you do have a lot of tense issues. I think that's probably the biggest fault I've noticed- not that you have a lot. It's just something to think about.

Update soon )
The Imagination Addict chapter 11 . 11/21/2010
i like what suzy did in this chpt. it adds more to her character. it may seem desperate n immature or childish, but it shows that she really just wants her parents to love her n she isn't bitchy just cos she's shallow. it's nice that another aspect of her is shown.
anon chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Your posessive

You're YOU ARE.

'I bet one day your going to do something good with your life'

WRONG!

(should be you're!)

Learn how to use them!
MasterArbor chapter 11 . 11/20/2010
Nice story. I read all the chapters in around two days, and I really found it quite addicting. I admit that there are some flaws, but the basic idea is exciting and refreshing. Plus, Jace is hot. :P
Pyro Band Ninja chapter 11 . 11/19/2010
Well then, that was certainly interesting...lol
Its.Not.Me.Its.You chapter 11 . 11/19/2010
IT WAS AWESOME!

Can't wait for more!

Hope you update soon!
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