My goodness... Susy pregnant? I dunno, she seems like the girl that would take precautions against that...

I wonder if Jace has heard of dylan? if someone commits suicide it is usually something well known

I love your story! This chapter was a really well written, and I can't wait to see how Jace and Mera's relationship goes. I also can't wait to see what happens with the "Baracuda Baby". Yes i've nicknamed it.

I love Jace! Can you send me one of him?

Great ;)

loved it . . . loved it . . . loved it! it was awesome! yay!

I love the story so far! If no one else wants to be your beta, I'll do it. You'll have to tell me how, though, since I've never done it before.

I love the preview of the story! I hope you continue to write it when you get the chance!

Love your writing!

Jade

Wow, lot of exclamation marks... sorry.

I love this story! Christian is so damn funny! And I fricking love Brand New Eyes! And Paramore!

I love this story so much! Honestly, it's just...wow... :P

A few minor typos here and there, though...Re-reading one more time would most likely fix that...

I love that we get to see more of Jace and Christian's relationship as friends...they're just so funny together... :D

And I love the development between Mera and Suzy...Didn't see it comming, but...I think it adds a nice twist to the story.

Great job, keep it up! :D

Did you get a beta, after all?

~§olitude

THIS IS REALLY GOOD PLEASE KEEP WRITING!

LUV YA ALL

SHATTERED!

MORE!

Is the word that needs to be done.

I like this story.

Alot.

I hope you can upload the next chapter soon.

~Ash

So little of Chris, I missed him.

I did love how you turned it for Mera and Susy to be friends again, it worked really well and I actually felt bad for her rather then hate her. Clever writing.

I dont know how the beta thing works, I re read my chapter one time before loading it and hope for the best, sometimes it works out and other times not so much. I hope you find one soon.

I just finished reading all your chapters and just had to review! I think you're really great at writing, and besides the few grammatical errors, i absolutely love it so far! I think your story line is so unique, and love your characters. Although, i find it interesting-not bad, just interesting that everyone else in the story has all these issues pertaining to sex, and then the main characters haven't even kissed! It's amusing, and i definitely give you credit for standing out. Your story caught my eye, and i can't wait for your next chapter!

Yay another chapter chase and mera are so cute

Please do, I'm very interested in it! And YAY! I love this story, I was so happy to see another chappie!

~Your Reader,

~Cara