It sounds good.

your main character is really cool he reminds me of my stepdad he is chinese and likes fried rice he doesnt like american food so he orders takeout everyday he ways 655 lbs yah dont believe me i will send a photo he can no longer do kungfu that was my plan to fatten him so he cannot hit me with his kungfu fists

I love this story! well thats all I can say..without having a fan girl moment

Slutty Buddy? Man i just love that guy and his one liners. I usually don't like stories with both POV's but I am truly enjoying this one and the pace is great, even if I'm dying for him to find out it's her who writes him. Please continue.

I was going to wait until I read all the chaps to review but this chapter made me laugh so hard I wanted you to know. I love Chris so much, seriously I'm fantasizing about him, he is awesome!

Susy reminds me of a girl I know who's very forthright, but girls like that, to be honest, don't have a lot of other girl friends. Bad boys always keep journals, don't ya know. To write their depressing poetry. _ I liked their conversation and how he just started talking to her out of the blue. Makes me wonder if maybe he has a clue who has his journal.

Cassandra

Tana I loved this story, I'm new to the website and when I first saw the title, I just had to click on was worth it too. I love this story and you are very talented for someone so young. I love this story and PLEASE continue this I can't wait to read more! )

I was instantly interested in the original plot because I had never imagined a bad boy having a diary! It seems off to a good start but I wonder whether the bad boy will feel angry that she read his diary or relieved that someone cares?

please update :)

(if you could, please review my story later too?)

This is a wonderful first chapter. It's really drawn me to want to read more.

Cassandra

duude that dylan chapter was beast!(:

I freaking loved it; i cant wait to see more of it.

Hi! I'm your brand new 2010 model reviewer! *waves*

So, I just wanted to say that the fact you're fourteen astounded me. Granted, when I was fourteen I was writing too but I've never ever had the guts to actually go to M level! So, congrats. I think it's absolutely insane that you're writing about this, but from one dirty-mind to another, it's made me laugh so hard. :)

No grammar mistakes. Pace, voice, etc. are good. Overall, if you don't hurry up and update I'll become Mera with a gun and miss all my shots.

~S

lovin this story so far hope you continue with it

i love this story! omg

BOTH STORYS ARE REALLY GOOD KEEP WRITING!

THIS IS REALLY GOOD1