| Reviews for Dear Moron |
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   Stella8Bella chapter 6 . 9/8/2010 I can't wait for the next chapter! Please update as soon as possible. |
| Jenny.Humphrey chapter 6 . 9/8/2010 Hey love the story so far. The character development is really good which helps the story alot. Update soon |
| SingInTheRain chapter 6 . 9/8/2010 This is some good stuff right herre! Woo! |
| Lullay chapter 6 . 9/8/2010 Mera's story made me tear up, it's sad how she doesn't want to care about people, but end up caring anyway, I understand at least that much, and I feel really close to her. Hope you keep up your good work As for the writing, I was wondering if you could make more of Jace's POV, I really loved the first one. For example, describing his state of mine after dropping Mera ? Well, just a selfish, really selfish hope |
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 1 . 9/8/2010 Aww, that last chapter was so sweet, altho sad :( Jace was a little harsh... Anyway, great chapter, and update soon! |
| aby pwn u chapter 6 . 9/7/2010 You went past me expectations a long while ago! i dont thinku rlize how awesome dis storee actully is |
| mehinator chapter 5 . 9/1/2010 good plot |
| ysabellayue chapter 5 . 8/31/2010 yeah i'm really lovin it more n more! by the way goodluck on your studies and a very advanced happy birthday! mwuaah . |
| poeticlump chapter 5 . 8/30/2010 Christian is hilarious :). I loved the stuffed animal jokes. And Jace is amazing as always! haha Another great chapter :D and I can't wait for more. |
| TheClosetWriter16 chapter 5 . 8/30/2010 OK, REALLY great chapter, but I have to admit the ending was a bit hard to understand. YOU are a REALLY good writer for a 13 yr old! |
| rosie chapter 5 . 8/29/2010 Hey... you should update more quickley... I really like this story! Its getting mare and more interesting. |
| Nicole chapter 5 . 8/29/2010 This was an exciting chapter! I like how dangerous he is and that Mera isn't really scared of him. |
| DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 5 . 8/29/2010 ah! i need to know what happens next! jace is soo amazing PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon ;D |
| aby pwn u chapter 5 . 8/29/2010 NO WAY! NO WAY! NO WAY! How on EARTH are u 13?Ur like a writing GODDESS (to me)! It was TOTALLY worth the wait and im so happy for this extremely long chapter :D Loving Jace! I hoped his "mystery girl" was Mera but he said he didnt know her name-was it Moron he was talking abt? but then he wouldnt know if shes beautiful :S Its so exciting and im so in love with this story and ESPECIALLY the whole plot! its greatt and im glad u got a little bit of suspense in there(y)! I really wanna see some Jera/Mace scenes alone :]Chao 4 now! |
| AshTempest chapter 5 . 8/29/2010 This is a greay story. Anxiouse for more. ~Ash |