Reviews for Dear Moron |
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noxonexhere chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 AW! THEY'RE SO CUTE! Seriously. |
pandarocket chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 I really love this story! :) It's so damn addictive, and I've been having a LOT of trouble trying to find a female main character I actually like :) Well, I like yours! I love how she's not perfect. :) She just feels strangely real. And I love it, haha. :) Keep writing! You're amazing :) |
Floppy125 chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 OMG I love this story! Jace's so cute! I can't believe he of all people gave her a stuffed animal! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! |
SmileEnthusiast chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 Hahaha Gilbert(: I that same thing as Christian does, I believe that you have to name the stuffed animal before giving it to someone. Therefore it shows that it is special! Hope you update soon, SE(: |
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 OH MY GOSH. I am fanning my face. This story is so amazing. It's funny in a twisted sort of way, and I think that it's sweet beyond belief. He gave her a stuffed animal. Holy shiz. I might faint. But yeah, I think my favorite part is definitely Mrs. Morgan talking about the different sex positions. WTF? Hahahah! Update soon please! |
OpenLocksWhoeverKnocks chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 ok i seriously love this story! the whole gum and gilbert thing is so cute! |
Hearts of Solitude chapter 1 . 7/30/2010 hm...sorry for not putting this in my actual review...meant too, but somehow forgot... Are you going to have another journal entry/letter in the next chapter? I absolutely love those... |
Hearts of Solitude chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 Oh my god, this is so amazing, so great and slightly addictive... I hope you can get your mom of the computer and update soon; I need to know what happens! I don't find your story very shaky anymore-it's much stronger. Personally, I've always loved tough guys with a soft chewy center...Jace is super sexy! And a mystery (which, let's be honest, makes him that much sexier...)! I'm really wondering what's up with him... I also love the humour! Mera's definitely not tough, but she's got a wicked sarcastic sense of humour... Please, update soon! |
ysabella yue chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 wow..i already love this story! so amazing and makes me think every end of the chapter of what will happen next..bahaha.. well thanks for this chapter! uhmm..wait i think you have a wrong word in this line's - "Gilbert says he's going to bitch slap you if you don't except him," it should be - "Gilbert says he's going to bitch slap you if you don't acept him," right? :D |
ysabella yue chapter 3 . 7/30/2010 yay! its a great chapter..you're so awesome..i love the lines..i was scared and laughing at the same time while reading this chapter.. keep it up! Goodluck! :D |
Jevanminx chapter 4 . 7/30/2010 Genius name for the rabbit, I loved that little scene, so cute. JM |
Pyro Band Ninja chapter 4 . 7/29/2010 This is epically amazing in eight diffrent ways! Or in other words, It is awesomescauce FTW! XD |
Fiuresa chapter 4 . 7/29/2010 omg i la-la-la-love this story! jace is so sweet (: Plz update it soon! |
kamwe kukua chapter 4 . 7/29/2010 AH! i love jace :) he seems like one of those really cute awkward kids hidden behind the whole bad boy scene! and i like christian too :) well mainly cause i like the name christian, but whatever...heh. i hope to see more diary action in the future? ;) oh and one thing i noticed that you might want to fix: "...I got kind of lucky to my wrist is fractured, luckily not broken." i think i only noticed this because of my weekly ER trips, but fractured and broken are the same thing. :P you might have meant sprained instead of fractured? sorry, i dont want to be rude or anything, but i figured you'd like to know. update asap! :) |
crazy girl 1901 chapter 4 . 7/29/2010 Thank you for updating with such an awesome chapter! no you really do rock. i mean it because most of the fictionpresses ive been reading suck but but yours is . . .GREAT! lol please update soon! |