Reviews for Dear Moron
noxonexhere chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
AW! THEY'RE SO CUTE! Seriously.
pandarocket chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
I really love this story! :)

It's so damn addictive, and I've been having a LOT of trouble trying to find a female main character I actually like :)

Well, I like yours! I love how she's not perfect. :) She just feels strangely real. And I love it, haha. :)

Keep writing! You're amazing :)
Floppy125 chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
OMG I love this story!

Jace's so cute! I can't believe he of all people gave her a stuffed animal!

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
SmileEnthusiast chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
Hahaha Gilbert(: I that same thing as Christian does, I believe that you have to name the stuffed animal before giving it to someone. Therefore it shows that it is special!

Hope you update soon,

SE(:
sandcastlesinthesand chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
OH MY GOSH. I am fanning my face. This story is so amazing.

It's funny in a twisted sort of way, and I think that it's sweet beyond belief. He gave her a stuffed animal. Holy shiz.

I might faint.

But yeah, I think my favorite part is definitely Mrs. Morgan talking about the different sex positions. WTF? Hahahah!

Update soon please!
OpenLocksWhoeverKnocks chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
ok i seriously love this story! the whole gum and gilbert thing is so cute!
Hearts of Solitude chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
hm...sorry for not putting this in my actual review...meant too, but somehow forgot...

Are you going to have another journal entry/letter in the next chapter? I absolutely love those...
Hearts of Solitude chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
Oh my god, this is so amazing, so great and slightly addictive...

I hope you can get your mom of the computer and update soon; I need to know what happens!

I don't find your story very shaky anymore-it's much stronger.

Personally, I've always loved tough guys with a soft chewy center...Jace is super sexy!

And a mystery (which, let's be honest, makes him that much sexier...)! I'm really wondering what's up with him...

I also love the humour! Mera's definitely not tough, but she's got a wicked sarcastic sense of humour...

Please, update soon!
ysabella yue chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
wow..i already love this story! so amazing and makes me think every end of the chapter of what will happen next..bahaha.. well thanks for this chapter! uhmm..wait i think you have a wrong word in this line's - "Gilbert says he's going to bitch slap you if you don't except him," it should be - "Gilbert says he's going to bitch slap you if you don't acept him," right? :D
ysabella yue chapter 3 . 7/30/2010
yay! its a great chapter..you're so awesome..i love the lines..i was scared and laughing at the same time while reading this chapter.. keep it up! Goodluck! :D
Jevanminx chapter 4 . 7/30/2010
Genius name for the rabbit, I loved that little scene, so cute.

JM
Pyro Band Ninja chapter 4 . 7/29/2010
This is epically amazing in eight diffrent ways! Or in other words, It is awesomescauce FTW! XD
Fiuresa chapter 4 . 7/29/2010
omg i la-la-la-love this story! jace is so sweet (: Plz update it soon!
kamwe kukua chapter 4 . 7/29/2010
AH! i love jace :) he seems like one of those really cute awkward kids hidden behind the whole bad boy scene! and i like christian too :) well mainly cause i like the name christian, but whatever...heh. i hope to see more diary action in the future? ;) oh and one thing i noticed that you might want to fix: "...I got kind of lucky to my wrist is fractured, luckily not broken." i think i only noticed this because of my weekly ER trips, but fractured and broken are the same thing. :P you might have meant sprained instead of fractured? sorry, i dont want to be rude or anything, but i figured you'd like to know. update asap! :)
crazy girl 1901 chapter 4 . 7/29/2010
Thank you for updating with such an awesome chapter! no you really do rock. i mean it because most of the fictionpresses ive been reading suck but but yours is . . .GREAT! lol please update soon!
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