| Reviews for Dear Moron |
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   cookiewolf chapter 2 . 7/28/2010 lol this stotry seems really interesting so far:D lolo at the breast cancer conversation it was so random yet funny) |
| classicallyclassic chapter 3 . 7/28/2010 I liked this chapter. It seemed a filler but it was good nonetheless. You introduced Christian very well. I must admit I was quite surprised that Christian was a tattoo artist. I didn't have that image of him when he was mentioned in Jace's entry. I like him though. And Suzy's points are declining quite rapidly in my book. I look forward to the next update! P.S. I love how guys have that one weak spot. Makes me super glad I'm a girl. |
| imy chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 I've been trying to find a good story to read for a long time. I'm glad that I've found yours. Please continue writing it :) |
| DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 3 . 7/27/2010 i am seriously in love with this story :D PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon XD |
| DELETE THIS ACCOUNT NOW 323402 chapter 2 . 7/27/2010 i love this story :D |
| HelgaBertoni chapter 3 . 7/27/2010 Loved the chapter, and so far the story is very well written , so I can't wait to read more! Hope to see an update ASAP! |
| poeticlump chapter 3 . 7/27/2010 Your chapters just get better and better ). I love Jace, officially. Lol. I loved how he was so worried about her, and the diary entries to and forth between them are really interesting. It's like they drive the story along. Awesome chapter. ) Hope you update soon! |
| poeticlump chapter 2 . 7/27/2010 I'm not much for smoking, but I remain unbiased because this is a great story ). And I really like Jace's character. He's definitely different. Great job D |
| poeticlump chapter 1 . 7/27/2010 This was great D It was short (it is a prologue after all), yet really meaningful. I love how she signed herself as Moron. That got a laugh outta me XD lol. Critique-wise I'd say to watch your sentence structures, try and make them flow a little more. Your grammar is great and the detail was killer ). I can't wait to read more! |
| rosie chapter 3 . 7/27/2010 I like this story... I just hope she dosen't turn bad... but continues to be who she is. I hope that she helps him somehow and brings out the good in him. I wonder if this is going to turn into a Cinderella story with her evil step sister. :-P |
| Nicole chapter 3 . 7/27/2010 Tell your mother you need to let your creativity out so your reviewers can read more! Hope to see another update in the very near future. |
| aby pwn u chapter 2 . 7/27/2010 Yay! She finally talked to him, :) Haha, A great story deserves a great reviewer ;)Np, ur stories are so amazing, NOT reading em would have to be a crime :P 4ever & always,Aby |
| OrangeXAngel chapter 2 . 7/26/2010 I really like where this story is heading. :) Your first two chapters are really worth reading and I think they're written well. I love the whole 'he writes in a journal and she writes back' concept, it's interesting, and I like how you introduced Jace, I didn't really think he would come up to her at the party. Can't wait for the next update! :D |
| andriyari chapter 2 . 7/26/2010 I like this story :) Susy sounds like a bitch but I guess it what makes it better, and the 'dear moron' thing, I like it. I didn't think that Jace would come up and talk to Mera though, and I don't really like that in the end, Mera tried to smoke. but all in all, it's a cool story :) can't wait to read the next chapter :D |
| naturewise chapter 2 . 7/26/2010 hey!I really like the idea of your story although i am a little bit disappointed in this chapter.I was kind of hoping Mera would help Jace get rid of his bad habits and make a new start, not the other way around, Jace drugging Mera into a whole lot of 't wait to see what will happen next!bye |