Reviews for Dear Moron
emmslay chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
i love this story :D
HelgaBertoni chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
Loved the chapter, and so far the story is very well written , so I can't wait to read more! Hope to see an update ASAP!
EmeraldMasquerade chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
Your chapters just get better and better ). I love Jace, officially. Lol. I loved how he was so worried about her, and the diary entries to and forth between them are really interesting. It's like they drive the story along.

Awesome chapter. ) Hope you update soon!
EmeraldMasquerade chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
I'm not much for smoking, but I remain unbiased because this is a great story ). And I really like Jace's character. He's definitely different.

Great job D
EmeraldMasquerade chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
This was great D It was short (it is a prologue after all), yet really meaningful. I love how she signed herself as Moron. That got a laugh outta me XD lol.

Critique-wise I'd say to watch your sentence structures, try and make them flow a little more. Your grammar is great and the detail was killer ).

I can't wait to read more!
rosie chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
I like this story... I just hope she dosen't turn bad... but continues to be who she is. I hope that she helps him somehow and brings out the good in him. I wonder if this is going to turn into a Cinderella story with her evil step sister. :-P
Nicole chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
Tell your mother you need to let your creativity out so your reviewers can read more! Hope to see another update in the very near future.
aby pwn u chapter 2 . 7/27/2010
Yay! She finally talked to him, :) Haha, A great story deserves a great reviewer ;)Np, ur stories are so amazing, NOT reading em would have to be a crime :P 4ever & always,Aby
OrangeXAngel chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
I really like where this story is heading. :) Your first two chapters are really worth reading and I think they're written well. I love the whole 'he writes in a journal and she writes back' concept, it's interesting, and I like how you introduced Jace, I didn't really think he would come up to her at the party. Can't wait for the next update! :D
andriyari chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
I like this story :)

Susy sounds like a bitch but I guess it what makes it better, and the 'dear moron' thing, I like it. I didn't think that Jace would come up and talk to Mera though, and I don't really like that in the end, Mera tried to smoke. but all in all, it's a cool story :) can't wait to read the next chapter :D
naturewise chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
hey!I really like the idea of your story although i am a little bit disappointed in this chapter.I was kind of hoping Mera would help Jace get rid of his bad habits and make a new start, not the other way around, Jace drugging Mera into a whole lot of 't wait to see what will happen next!bye
SmileEnthusiast chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
Great chapter! I am liking a lot about this story already. My favorite thing in this chapter was how she thought he was kind of being a creeper on her part, yet it seems like he was kind of being a creeper of his own. I know this will sound weird, but I find that so cute! Maybe, because I have had experiences of my own that feel like you are being a creeper in your eyes, but really you are curious about this person, and you are unknowingly forming feelings for said person.

I hope you update soon,

SE(:
classicallyclassic chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
Is it just me, or does Jace seem a little awkward? But, he's a likable character nonetheless. I can't say the same about Suzy though. Great update!
Nicole chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
Update soon, please! I'm curious to see where this goes.
kamwe kukua chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
M...i kind of like this. i like the whole 'dear moron' thing, but i guess thats the point. updates would be nice. :)
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