Nice chapter, Tana! :-)

Recently, I got a piercing too! A rook!

I like the idea with the diary!

Mira

But smoking is bad - I quit a while ago. ;-)

Mira

Aww it's so cute I love this story! There wa one thug that I noticed where he asked her a question like "is that alright?" or something I can't remember the actual words and she was like " yeah I am" and it don't really make sense but other than that I really loved it :)

Wow this is a very interesting story! Jace is by far my favourite character. Mera is so sweet! And Christian, just plain awesome. I can't wait to see where the story develops from here. Hope Jace and Mera get their happy ending :)

I know i havent reviewed any of the other chapters, i usually read completed stories and review altigether in the last chater, i have to say I AM HOOKED ON THIS I ACTUALLY NEED MORE CHAPTERS.

I love it so much! The characters and storyline, and omg the way you write. The pairing is socute too, jace and mera3

Your writing just makes me wan to read more. I started reading this at 10pm now its half four in the orning and i cant stop. Ilove it! I really hope you can upload a new chater soon! Of course its your time so dont feel pressured.

anyway. I love this story thanks so much for bringing me reading happiness yaaaay!3

Btw ignore any crappy typos i have, its hard typing on an ipad quickly at half 4 in the morning considering i fell asleep at 5 in the morning the two previous nights before.. Hahhh.

WOW! I was not expecting that. 'I gotta shit'

That's amazing.

Way to go Chris, way to exit the room :)

He is such a loveable character.

I am really enjoying this story so far! I just wanted to point out that in this chapter, Jace gave Mera a "blue emerald ring" and I was wondering if you had made a typo because emeralds are typically green while sapphires are normally blue. :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl

Aw, this was such an awesome chapter and I have missed Jace and Mera so much! This was great :) And I loved the end about Mera and her mother, because really her mom is ridiculous.

Favorite parts:

I didn't have a fucking love-bite, no the thing on my neck looked too vicious to be a love-bite. It looked more like someone had punched my neck. The love-bite and the gash on my face would no doubt have my family and the Morgans thinking Jace was some type of woman beater.

Jace laughed at my expression without a care in a world and I could only wish that I could be as careless as him. I turned to glare at him.

"You did this on purpose!" I accused, my bottom lip jutted out in anger. Jace took one look at my expression and just laughed harder, obviously unashamed by his actions.

"Well you're my girlfriend, I needed something to show that." Jace said playfully, he winked at me and flicked my chin in a 'loving' way.

Oh Jace :P Gah, I love him!

And oh my gosh, I can't wait to see what happens between Christian and Jane! What's going to happen ?

Hey there! I love your story! :D I mean really, you should be writing books by now, gosh! I will never understand how people can stay on the same topic for so long! But I'm glad they can, other wise we'd have no books! D: The horror! Anyways... I love it, and I can't wait to finish it tomorrow! Until my next review (for I shall review again soon...) have a lovely weekend! :D

i find this story highly enjoyable. not only that, but it is also written very well, and has good vocabulary use. you successfully joined between romance, humor, suspense, and action in one story, which is very hard to accomplish. in short, i'd have to say, that this is most definitely my favorite story on this website. keep up the good work, and pls update soon, cuz i already can't wait for the next chapter :)

Brilliant chapter as always! Ewww her dad having an affair, that's disgusting- especially to have his daughter find out about his 'bit on the side'.

Omg Mera got off lightly with her mum, I'm 17 yet If I came from spending a night with a lad, I'd get the belt!

So happy you're doing a christian and Jane spin off- made my day! :)

I have always loved spin-offs. Especially of interesting characters! Well, that's one more thing to look forward to! Yay, Valentine's Day! Let's see Jace be all romantic and stuff, haha. I hope nothing goes wrong though... So anyway, I looked at what alphabets you've used, and you have about six left - ish? Does the story end at the last alphabet? Just wondering. Great job! Can't wait for the next one. :D

Her mother is such a snobby bitch. I just want to punch her in the face. Wouldn't that be fun?

I love Jace, he's such a sweetheart.

I haven't finished chapter 3 yet but it's amazing so far! I LOVE it! :)

aww its so cute

dont worry about it, she is my bestfriend and i tell her all the amazing stories i read and yours happened to be one

please update soon

I LOVE IT