Reviews for The World's Richest Lie |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Also, I noticed the Stardust reference in the last chapter ;) *wink*. (Can't review the same chapter twice) You seem to like your movie references :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another wonderful story. You have an interesting writing style - almost like a diary entry. One inconsistency I wonder about is Mr Wentworth's age. You said in chapter 21 that he was in his 30s. But if he's Sam's mom's contempory, then he'd have to be in his 40s at least. Unless he was chasing after Elizabeth in his early teenage years? ... Anyhow, thought I'd point it out. Keep up the writing. I can't wait for another update of Dragon's Slave. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! I really enjoyed it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That slogan made me laugh out loud, causing my whole family to look over at me in bewilderment. I didn't really want to explain. I'm still tying hard not to bust up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so good. love the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I READ IT BEFORE AND I READ IT AGAIN AND I STILL LOVE IT SOOOOO MUCH! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this story. It's not 2 am and I stayed up for 3 hours reading this 3 |
![]() ![]() I liked the beginning, but then felt a little disappointed when I continued to read. The main character seems like she's a teenager when making some decisions and some stuff happen in which I did not understand, for example, Her sudden adoption of the little boy without finding out his information. story needed more thought and structure. Other than that, the idea is pretty good. |
![]() ![]() Aww:] I loved. Very cute. |
![]() ![]() congrats this is the first story i read on fiction press and i love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story very much. The premise reminded me of Arabella by Georgette Heyer. Thanks for writing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGOSH! they got married! :O I'm glad they did. It's a good ending. I love how she just blurts everything out in the end, and how Andrew still loves her even though she's not rich. I can't believe Nicolas died. The twins were definitely my favorite. I can't believe it's finally over. T.T Loved the story. Can't wait to read Dreamwalker. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i wonder teh exact same thing... what would have been of me if you never came up with the world's richest lie? love it so much... i think i'll marry you :P will ya? lol wait so this is the end? the very end? oh no... i'll miss it so much! -M |
![]() ![]() awesome story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds great! Can't wait to read more of this new story ) |