Reviews for Mistakes
Heather N.S chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Nice one! I like how you made an insignificant situation into something beautiful and horrifying at the same time. The only thing I found wrong with this one is don't forget to start a new paragraph every time someone different starts talking! :)
Amitul chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
The story had my attention and I enjoyed reading. Good job on the detailing, especially with the character's emotion.