|Reviews for The Last Cry|
| Guest chapter 19 . 3/1
And so I have come to the last chapter. I knew this book wasn't finished when I started it, but I had hoped, for what I don't know. Could you please finish it? Or at least write a chapter summarizing how it all would have ended? Anything really. We still don't know why Bastion did what he did all those years ago. I want to believe he had a good reason (well, there never could be a good reason for something like that) or that he was somehow brainwashed into believing he did what he did. And I want to know who Mary finally ends up with. As annoyed as I am with her wishy washy feelings, I am still intrigued by the romance. I like her with Bastion and I like her with Leon. Although, I feel that Bastion needs Mary more than Leon does. For Bastion, she is the only good thing that has come out of his life. I don't want him to lose that. Leon is surrounded by love from all sides. He has family and friends and a girlfriend who I think actually cares for him. Bastion has no one. Maybe his butterfly's, but they can't exactly return the love he shows them. This, and An Obsession with Love are amazing stories. You have a gift for being able to create a world strong enough, creative enough to draw people in. Your characters as well are all loveable and real. Please finish this story and please continue to gift us with more of your creations.
| NikitaKServensky chapter 19 . 10/21/2014
I know you haven't updated in a really long time...but can you please consider doing so, if it's convenient for you, of course. :) Your story is amazing-keep it up.
| Samantha chapter 19 . 12/14/2013
I love this chapter! Please write more soon!
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 19 . 10/1/2013
You really must update this! It's been a couple years and I am simply entranced to just keep reading
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 15 . 10/1/2013
I am shocked!
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 14 . 10/1/2013
Grr! What a horrible time to end the chapter! I must continue reading!
MUST, I TELL YOU! MUST!
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 13 . 10/1/2013
I really love this long chapters!
Good update. Bastion just irks me. Doi! But...he's a good complex character and I can't wait to hear what secrets will come spilling forth.
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 12 . 10/1/2013
OOOH! How nice! I feel like Loran is probably going to be running off with some guy, I just feel it!
Bastion, I adore you but I really just want to punch you in the face...wait...isn't that ironic since his dad does that to him? O.o BASTION! Forigve me, I didn't mean it!
Ugh, my head hurts. I'm losing my mind!
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 11 . 9/30/2013
I'm still very curious for what's going to happen...
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 10 . 9/30/2013
Ah man! Not another cliff hanger! Dude, this chapter was BRILLIANCE! I am so hooked to this story. The ending was fantastic and I am so ready for the secret of the Welles' family to come pouring out!
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 9 . 9/30/2013
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 8 . 9/30/2013
Aww! I liked this chapter! (You and I are so different! You love the long hair, I can't stand it! Lol!)
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 7 . 9/30/2013
AHHHHH! What a wonderful way to end the chapter! It was a complete shock and it was wonderfully written and just...Ah!
No words to explain the ending. Im not even upset that its a cliff hanger!
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 6 . 9/30/2013
I'm so excited! I can't wait to read more!
| OurHeartsBleeding chapter 4 . 9/30/2013
Grr! A cliffhanger! Only way to get over it is to read more I suppose!
Blast you, cliffhangers!