Reviews for The Last Cry |
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![]() ![]() soooo touchin i wnt to knw d end plzzz kind of confusing to me |
![]() ![]() Pls update |
![]() ![]() ![]() ur story is very interesting and intriguing..pls don't abandon this ..thanks |
![]() ![]() Hey lightprevails! U r an awesome writer and everybody who has read something u hv written would agree with me.. Your stories r so very engaging. Bt leaving an incomplete story is so unfair. So please please please complete this one. Even if has to be something like a summary, highlighting what would have happened next. That would be really very nice of you. :) You are a great and a very creative writer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHAAATT?! That's it? What happens next, LightPrevails? Come on D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooohhhhh a sequel. I kinda foolishly sent you a PM to beg for an update and a sequel to Obsession of Love.. :D Sorry Thank you sooooo much for this |
![]() ![]() ![]() o my god its been ages you haven't updated please update soon pleaaaaaaaaase |
![]() ![]() And so I have come to the last chapter. I knew this book wasn't finished when I started it, but I had hoped, for what I don't know. Could you please finish it? Or at least write a chapter summarizing how it all would have ended? Anything really. We still don't know why Bastion did what he did all those years ago. I want to believe he had a good reason (well, there never could be a good reason for something like that) or that he was somehow brainwashed into believing he did what he did. And I want to know who Mary finally ends up with. As annoyed as I am with her wishy washy feelings, I am still intrigued by the romance. I like her with Bastion and I like her with Leon. Although, I feel that Bastion needs Mary more than Leon does. For Bastion, she is the only good thing that has come out of his life. I don't want him to lose that. Leon is surrounded by love from all sides. He has family and friends and a girlfriend who I think actually cares for him. Bastion has no one. Maybe his butterfly's, but they can't exactly return the love he shows them. This, and An Obsession with Love are amazing stories. You have a gift for being able to create a world strong enough, creative enough to draw people in. Your characters as well are all loveable and real. Please finish this story and please continue to gift us with more of your creations. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you haven't updated in a really long time...but can you please consider doing so, if it's convenient for you, of course. :) Your story is amazing-keep it up. |
![]() ![]() I love this chapter! Please write more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You really must update this! It's been a couple years and I am simply entranced to just keep reading |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am shocked! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Grr! What a horrible time to end the chapter! I must continue reading! MUST, I TELL YOU! MUST! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really love this long chapters! Good update. Bastion just irks me. Doi! But...he's a good complex character and I can't wait to hear what secrets will come spilling forth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OOOH! How nice! I feel like Loran is probably going to be running off with some guy, I just feel it! Bastion, I adore you but I really just want to punch you in the face...wait...isn't that ironic since his dad does that to him? O.o BASTION! Forigve me, I didn't mean it! Ugh, my head hurts. I'm losing my mind! |