|Reviews for The Shadowy Past|
| ColonialTimesGirl chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
Love it! Keep going! xD
| Datarin chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
The story's great, but the writing style gets to me - something about it makes the entire read jarring. The irregular changes from present tense to past, and then back? Also, some punctuation seem out of place or overused.