Reviews for Go on,
danny.m chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
aww... that was really sweet. some grammar and spelling mistakes here and there, but all in all it was great. keep it up!
Yipeekayay chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
okay, i REALLY like this, but I'd just like to point out some grammar mistakes:

"Tell me if you were lieing." I think it's "lying" :D

"You dont meen them." It's "mean" :D

Also: "And i bet the reader thinks its I love you,

But no Its i hate you, he doesnt meen it."

It's supposed to be: "And i bet the reader thinks IT'S I love you,

But no, IT'S i hate you, AND he doesnt MEAN it."

Those with all caps are the ones I wanted to point out/add. :D But the overall poem is really good :) Keep writing :D